Carmelo 發表於 2004-11-13 20:29:43

off~~

努力!!

截拳道小子 發表於 2004-11-13 20:32:31

:icon054:
English................... :icon110::icon114:

Carmelo 發表於 2004-11-13 20:36:34

:icon054:
English................... :icon110::icon114:
????

截拳道小子 發表於 2004-11-13 20:40:39

????
:(

syl.B ?
maybe E or fail

many words no need to use .......
tense ...........
many minor mistakes:)

Carmelo 發表於 2004-11-13 20:46:05

:(

syl.B ?
maybe E or fail

many words no need to use .......
tense ...........
many minor mistakes:)
下..差咁遠
我post左兩次係第二d forum到呀..呢到係第三篇~~
d人都話拎D冇問題既

WainSeven 發表於 2004-11-13 20:52:50

呢篇野
好難有d呀 :icon101:

Carmelo 發表於 2004-11-13 20:55:32

呢篇野
好難有d呀 :icon101:
係? :icon099:

截拳道小子 發表於 2004-11-13 21:06:33

下..差咁遠
我post左兩次係第二d forum到呀..呢到係第三篇~~
d人都話拎D冇問題既
:icon055:

still have about half year ........ :)

cmh_2002 發表於 2004-11-13 21:13:00

係? :icon099:
唔睇你content...

淨係your friend都有問題 :o

食脾細路 發表於 2004-11-13 21:13:34

1.文法錯
2.太生硬啦......

Carmelo 發表於 2004-11-13 21:18:15

:icon119: 好慘...唯有閉關修煉啦!! :icon083:

食脾細路 發表於 2004-11-13 21:21:02

:icon119: 好慘...唯有閉關修煉啦!! :icon083:
閉關無用架 :mad:


要問先會識啊呀 :icon101::icon101:

bobby_zamora 發表於 2004-11-13 21:21:57

hard to have d
there are many mistakes in tense
and..
u even cannot get the correct format
(don't use Your friend...but Yours)

納比 發表於 2004-11-13 23:15:07

冇得睇．．．

Raul 發表於 2004-11-13 23:59:33

冇得睇．．．
一識
不過估到係點 :icon032:
加油呀ej :icon032:

Newcastle Fans 發表於 2004-11-14 00:09:22

I cannot read your words...
Anyway, if you really want to improve your English, you need to do many things: read more, speak more, and listen to more.
You should read SCMP everyday, and speak English as well. (If you have a older brother or sister, that's good.)
Moreover, you can do some online listening exercises.
URL: http://www.esl-lab.com

Raul 發表於 2004-11-14 00:13:38

唔知睇下 the elements of style會唔會有幫助呢? :confused:
我打算問人借黎睇
又唔知買唔買好..成$110 :o
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