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Reasons for abuse of animals and possible solution.No more abuse
The burgeoning problem that has aroused constant awareness and public attention has been the abuse of animals. Why somebody treat animals so cruel?That's a question many people,if not all, will ask.In this essay,I will attempt to figure out some underlying reasons relating to this problem and suggest some possible solutions to deal with it.
The reasons of the abuse of animals are threefold.To begin with,many will divert their anger to animals.Working pressure,interpersonal conflict or financial difficulty are some of problem Hong Kong people always encounter.The anger or dissatisfication derived from these problem may lead people to act in violent way.If they can not handle their emotional problem properly or nobody can share their personal woe,they may choose to turn their anger to innooent animals by not providing them with food,beating them or leaving them unattended.Besides,those who suffer from social injustices are too timid to express theirselves and seek way to resolve their problem.They may choose to hurt animals to regain their self-esteem and release their anger inside.
Second of all,some may underestimate the cost of raising a pet,like dogs or cats.People always buy animals as pets without second thought.They just buy them as a 'toy' for fun and disregard the cost involved.Though raising a pet is less expensive than raising a child,the cost involving health care and food is still significate for many.Once people find it difficult to raise their pet or they feel them not lovely any more,they will abandon them in a street or even vent their anger on them by maltreating them.
Third,it maybe a commmon reason,pets being given to those who do not want to receive.Some people like to buy their friends a pet as a birthday gift and they never think whether their friends love pet or not.People receiving the pet therefore have to raise the pet to avoid disappointing their friends.In fact,they have their own reasons for not wanting the pet.Subsequently,they may be apathetic to their pet and even treat them cruely.
As we can see,what can we do to deal with the problem?First of all,the public should face up to this problem.Animal's life is no difference to our life.We should learn to respect them.Just as we want other's respect,so too animals want our respect.Please evaculate your affordability and the time and effort involved in looking after the pet prior to buying a pet.As far as the government is concerned,launching advertising campagin through public services either on television or on the radio,to make the public constantly aware of the level of harm the abuse could do to animals.Besides,I think the penalty of the abuse is too lax and lenient.It is difficult to prohibit people from not abusing animals.Some heavier and stiffer penalty should be imposed.For example,extending the duration of imprisonment or increasing the fines could be a deterrent to prevent the abuse from happening.
To conclude,any form of life,both animals and people,deserve respect.Nobody can deprive of other's right to survive.I hope people can show more respect for animals whose life is no less precious than human's life.Then,there is no more animals abuse cases.
[ 本帖最後由 Zinedine 於 2007-3-2001:27 AM 編輯 ] 你搵個阿sir改會好d
始終有經驗d:icon101: 原帖由 Raul 於 2007-3-2001:32 AM 發表
你搵個阿sir改會好d
始終有經驗d:icon101:
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我自問CE得E , 唔方便評鑑 :icon101: 原帖由 Raul 於 2007-3-2001:32 AM 發表
你搵個阿sir改會好d
始終有經驗d:icon101:
就係無:icon101: 我自問最差就係作文,唔識評:icon101:
CE:1st :E
2nd: F:icon101: 唔想睇晒成篇文
不過有d野我諗你要留意,唔好用first of all, second of all 呢d, 俾人講得好唔formal
我唔知ue 個marking mind 唔mind 呢樣, 示過ielts 就好care lor 原帖由 francesco_totti 於 2007-3-2002:06 AM 發表
唔想睇晒成篇文
不過有d野我諗你要留意,唔好用first of all, second of all 呢d, 俾人講得好唔formal
我唔知ue 個marking mind 唔mind 呢樣, 示過ielts 就好care lor
唔好寫就最好 原帖由 Zinedine 於 2007-3-2001:24 AM 發表
As we can see,what can we do to deal with the problem?
高手們, As we can see後應唔應該用問句?
我想知好耐:icon101: 原帖由 基維蝦 於 2007-3-2001:47 AM 發表
我自問最差就係作文,唔識評:icon101:
CE:1st :E
2nd: F:icon101:
我覺得出面作文亂改o既:icon101: 原帖由 Zinedine 於 2007-3-2001:46 發表
就係無:icon101:
搵其他o個d囉:icon101: 我都費時比意見
因為我2次都係D...:o 原帖由 Keith 於 2007-3-2006:26 AM 發表
高手們, As we can see後應唔應該用問句?
我想知好耐:icon101:
唔應該:icon101: 好怪 ...@ some sentences :icon009:
but i just E :sacchi:
no need to concern about my opinion :sacchi: 原帖由 2076 於 2007-3-2009:58 AM 發表
我覺得出面作文亂改o既:icon101:
算啦:icon101:
呢篇係咪article黎架??~ 原來我writing 拎D , 算唔錯 :icon101: 原帖由 肥仔麟 於 2007-3-2808:02 AM 發表 http://hkcm.hkehost.net/forum/images/common/back.gif
原來我writing 拎D , 算唔錯 :icon101:
我想問你間學校原校既除左你，有邊個writting羅d or above?(冇記錯你個間學校同我間差不多?) :icon101: 原帖由 杰少仔 於 2007-3-2906:47 PM 發表 http://hkcm.hkehost.net/forum/images/common/back.gif
我想問你間學校原校既除左你，有邊個writting羅d or above?(冇記錯你個間學校同我間差不多?) :icon101:
:icon101: 我果班無 , 原校升上去B卷writing D到應該得我
其他唔知點解好慘烈 . 好多writing都F/U :icon101:
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